Good writing is rewriting. Somebody brilliant told me that. Well, it took about 4 days of work to break the story, and it was good but not great. It took writing a script for a 2 minute trailer and being passed to another brilliant set of eyes to make it pop. So now the box is magic, and a new clue appears when something is achieved in the game. And you still get the big reveal at the end, because then the last thing to appear in the box is the reveal. Yeah, this kicks arse. Now to actually voice and cut the trailer...
